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joy poem

November 2, 2017 - Uncategorized

joy at the warmth I love warmth more than anything.

joy at the warmth keeps me alive

 

joy at the cat purrs really loud

joy at the cat sounds like a car

 

joy at friends understanding

joy at friends entertaining

 

joy at the fun of video games

joy at the passing of time

3 thoughts on “joy poem

indigo2014

I really liked you poem. I liked the different sections and the words you used. Good Job!
Keep writing,
Indigo

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leo2014

Having the joy at the start of each line was good repetition and you said everything that you liked. Video gamez

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phoebe2014

Hi Nick
Good job on this!
I like how both lines in each verses are on one thing!
Good job keep writing
Phoebe

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