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October 20, 2017 - Uncategorized

one day in the bushes an old man was walking around some very naughty kids one of them had a water gun! the kid with the water gun decided that the old person was too old so him as his friends devised a plan they would go around into the bushes and spray the man into the lake! as the kids slowly crept into the bushes they heard a barking sound so the all jumped but thankfully the man never noticed… they went behind him and squirt they hit him into the lake only it was their MUM!

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antsclass

Nick,
this is a great little piece- I love the way you have crafted a clear beginning, middle and end (with a twist) in only 100 words. I’m also impressed with the way you are experimenting with vocabulary and sentence structure. Be careful with punctuation-particularly remember to put capitals at the start of your sentences!
great work
Ant

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